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Open Poetry #2

Rebirth

Wolfgang
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 124
Hamilton, Ont. Canada

0 posted 1999-09-02 10:07 PM

I dreamed last that I could fly
and dance upon the fickle wind
and ride the updrafts to the sky
and spin back down to earth again.

That I touched wings with many friends,
the petrels, gulls, the eagle brave
and glide and soar above the land,
then rest on rolling swells and waves.

I felt that none could fence me in,
not body, soul, nor spirit mind,
a freedom of profound intense
that tears of joy formed in my eyes.

Rebirth! If just for one lone night,
a dreamscape to another world,
with envy I now realize
that this...is how the Phoenix felt.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-09-02 10:17 PM

Wolfgang,
Let me be the first to send a breeze
To lift you to fantasies appease.
Well done, I enjoyed.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-09-02 10:18 PM

You know I love this one....

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-09-03 12:55 PM

Beautiful! Full of magic!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-09-03 10:27 AM

Well done, Sir.

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