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Poetic Poets Perfect Pedantry |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Caliginous cacophony filled with slag DarkSong bellows a tune to DarkRag Mysterious melancholy chills made of DarkRainbow shadows over DarkDove Profound pedantry from each mouth DarkTraveler journeys to DarkSouth Depravity deepens and splits the whole DarkSilver drained from each DarkSoul Gloom gathering silent monotony DarkSea slicing into DarkNanny Doleful drums midnight stabbin’ DarkCrag falls prey to DarkTabin Penumbral pulses have no choice DarkAngel can silence DarkVoice Wild wounds stirred into salt DarkCat slashes into DarkWalt Secret seminaries in darkened cowl DarkFemme quiets the hoot of DarkOwl Hell’s halls are the Devil’s mine Hidden from sight is DarkdeVine |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was different. Not changing sides on us are ya? good one! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is dark !!! or, should it be titled..."Through the forum.....darkly"? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Somebody - Turn on the lights in here!!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Excellent work! ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
May Darkness shine upon you always. Quite refreshing. Michael |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh Ms. Dark deVine... I love it!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Jeez, My eyes were hurting towards the end..Too dark in here..!!! Real different PDV..Well done.. ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hey, what you all talking about, did none of you see that rainbow sneak in???...LOL Brilliant use of names PDV...:-)) Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I love it.. Ms. deVine you are brillant.. I like the use of the poets names.. Now which Cat were you talking about? Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Poet, this is GREAT! I love it, well done |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is quite a departure for you, ms. dv and I think you did a fabulous job with it! I love the use of vocabulary, structure of the verse, and the dark theme. This brightened my day! MORE! -dp  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea....say the title of this one five times real quick!!! Great work there deVine!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just thought we needed a little levity to relax us after the stress of losing Open Forum #1. I thought perhaps we should all be 'dark' for a bit so I took the liberty of changing your 'light' names to 'dark' (got a twofer in Alicat and LadyCat and Balladeer became DarkSong). Anyway, it was fun! Thanks for your comments. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, deVine one... but where is Sunshine when you need her? LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Your dark candle lit up the forum so dark That everyone is blinking from the spark. And feeling around made me LOL. |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Smile .... ouch ... hate it when I bump my shin wandering around in here ... Thanks DPDV |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Wonderful poem PDV, loved the darkness. If darkcrag is me then this is only the second time that someone has put my name in a poem, the first was Toerag, mind you he did SPELL it right!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Craig.. it is you! I didn't want you to see how dark it was in my poem so I removed your "i".....get it? LOL.........wait..am I the only one laughing here? Oh well..not the first time my joke was funny only to me! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Neener neener! Because I wanted to! |
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