Open Poetry #2 |
The Rose |
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The Rose Leaves alone Fear unknown Searching for the rose Lost Blackness draws near Crashing through leaves Warmth lies in shadows Strange among these trees Unfamiliar to the eye A rose Impossible to see Secluded in an image Beneath obscurity Through the gloom Fading from view Slipping Forever passed Vanished -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting format on this one...but it flows nicely ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The sands of time are forever flowing and changing the world and what we know. I really like this one.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is still a favorite of mine!!! Thanks so much guys!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was different! Not quite what I expected. A nice surprise though. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks!!! I like to surprise people!! Am glad I did whtdove!! Justbleu |
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