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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
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Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-09-15 04:43 AM


Evil Dreams could never be more sublime.
I anticipate each night I'm with him.
He writes for me the most beautiful rhyme.
Across cyber-seas of love my heart swims.

I'll climb tops of mountains, tell everyone
That I love him and forever I will-
I'll profess to the world that he's the One,
He loves me and lets my heart be still!

Evil Dreams keep my world safe, keep it sound.
I never imagined loving this way...
He'll be in my heart letting love abound
And forever, that is where he will stay.

Evil Dreaming is my greatest true love!
One voice sings this song from heaven above!

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."




[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 09-15-99).]

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-15 04:45 AM


Be still my silver tongue, let not golden oratory flow from my mouth.

I'm speechless so I fall back on forum replies. Gave me more than a moment's pause it did. Wonderful verse, dear. It touches me like no other words have.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©




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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-09-15 04:45 AM


Beautiful, and well deserved from what I've seen!
~one voice~
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3 posted 1999-09-15 04:54 AM


Thank you, Dream... I don't know what to say... Thank you, Christopher... yes, he IS very deserving!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 1999-09-15 05:06 AM


Nice job of intentional mis-interpretation!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 1999-09-15 05:12 AM


Lovely poem!!! I enjoyed it!!

Thanks!!

Jusbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
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6 posted 1999-09-15 05:21 AM


I like to think of it more as an announcement! hehehe

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
7 posted 1999-09-15 09:02 AM


This is great...I wish all annoucements
were this way. hehe.

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Helewes

~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA
8 posted 1999-09-15 08:47 PM


Thanks Jenny Lee!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 1999-09-15 08:51 PM


Wow, great work, one voice!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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10 posted 1999-09-16 02:35 AM


I feel the desire to tell my Lady once again what her words and presence mean to me and once again my glibness fails. Suffice it to say that no words nor woman has ever honored me near as much as she has.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©



~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA
11 posted 1999-09-16 02:49 AM


I'm all smiles Dreamy!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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12 posted 1999-09-16 02:55 AM


Wow, ~one voice~ this is beautiful.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

13 posted 1999-09-17 05:54 PM


You are mine as well.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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