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~one voice~
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0 posted 1999-09-10 07:19 AM


Hush, my darling, go to sleep
And meet me in my dreams.
My heart is yours to hold and keep,
To mend its withered strings.
Sleep with me under the moon
Until the night turns day.
Take away my miffs and gloom-
Tell me you're here to stay.
Let's fly away to distant lands
On magic carpet rides.
Soaring high and holding hands,
Right at each other's sides.
Kiss me high up in the sky
And tell me we are One.
With you, my soul takes wings to fly-
My journey's just begun.
You give me wings that carry me
Through places I must go.
You are the star that guides me
And the wind that holds me so.
You give me grace to hold me strong
When winds, themselves, die down.
You take my hand, pull me along
Through each and every town.
The love you give I need like air-
Without it I can't breathe.
What are dreams without you there?
Nightmares that I seethe...
My heart is yours to hold and keep-
You mend its withered strings.
So, hush, my darling, go to sleep
And meet me in my dreams.

©1999 Erin Solari



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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-09-10 07:24 AM


My silver tongue is stilled in a moment of golden silence out of respect for she who penned this and because my sarcasm has died, becoming ash. I am deeply touched, love. Once again you work your wonders well.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©




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~one voice~
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2 posted 1999-09-10 07:25 AM


Only for you.

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


suthern
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3 posted 1999-09-10 07:52 AM


Beautiful...
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-09-10 07:56 AM


Wow!..I ditto Suthern...:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


WhtDove
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5 posted 1999-09-10 09:56 AM


One Voice, you have written quite a beautiful poem here! I really enjoyed reading this. Very touching piece indeed!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-10 10:16 AM


One Voice....this is absolutely beautiful. You have crafted a masterful piece, so perfect in its rhythym and rhyme. Well done!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Pepper
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7 posted 1999-09-10 10:23 AM


lovely reading...I agree with Hoot....this flows beautifully

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

~one voice~
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8 posted 1999-09-10 12:41 PM


Thank you all so very much! I appreciate your kind words and support!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Andrew Scott
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9 posted 1999-09-10 04:57 PM


Very beautiful. May your dreams slip into reality.
caroline
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10 posted 1999-09-10 06:51 PM


Boundless in its beauty, Erin...very, very lovely poetry.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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11 posted 1999-09-10 06:56 PM


~One Voice~, what can I say, this took my breath away. A beautiful poem

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13
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TX , USA
12 posted 1999-09-10 07:11 PM



What a beautiful love song.!! ..It took my breath away.. Well done one voice..!!

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



Alwye
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13 posted 1999-09-11 02:08 AM


Wow, phenomenal...masterfully done, one voice. Beautiful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


~one voice~
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14 posted 1999-09-11 02:16 AM


Thank you all so very, very much again! I'm humbled!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Denise
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15 posted 1999-09-11 03:17 PM


This is absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading this one!
DreamEvil
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16 posted 1999-09-17 06:04 PM


Truly in this verse does my Lady show to the world her love for me. I know not why she does and I do not care. It is enough to know that she does.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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