Open Poetry #2 |
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Dreams- For Scott |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Hush, my darling, go to sleep And meet me in my dreams. My heart is yours to hold and keep, To mend its withered strings. Sleep with me under the moon Until the night turns day. Take away my miffs and gloom- Tell me you're here to stay. Let's fly away to distant lands On magic carpet rides. Soaring high and holding hands, Right at each other's sides. Kiss me high up in the sky And tell me we are One. With you, my soul takes wings to fly- My journey's just begun. You give me wings that carry me Through places I must go. You are the star that guides me And the wind that holds me so. You give me grace to hold me strong When winds, themselves, die down. You take my hand, pull me along Through each and every town. The love you give I need like air- Without it I can't breathe. What are dreams without you there? Nightmares that I seethe... My heart is yours to hold and keep- You mend its withered strings. So, hush, my darling, go to sleep And meet me in my dreams. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My silver tongue is stilled in a moment of golden silence out of respect for she who penned this and because my sarcasm has died, becoming ash. I am deeply touched, love. Once again you work your wonders well. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-10-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Only for you. ![]() ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful... ![]() |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Wow!..I ditto Suthern...:-)) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
One Voice, you have written quite a beautiful poem here! I really enjoyed reading this. Very touching piece indeed! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
One Voice....this is absolutely beautiful. You have crafted a masterful piece, so perfect in its rhythym and rhyme. Well done!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely reading...I agree with Hoot....this flows beautifully ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you all so very much! I appreciate your kind words and support! ![]() ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Very beautiful. May your dreams slip into reality. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Boundless in its beauty, Erin...very, very lovely poetry. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
~One Voice~, what can I say, this took my breath away. A beautiful poem ![]() ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
What a beautiful love song.!! ..It took my breath away.. ![]() ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, phenomenal...masterfully done, one voice. Beautiful work. ![]() ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you all so very, very much again! I'm humbled! ![]() ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading this one! ![]() |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Truly in this verse does my Lady show to the world her love for me. I know not why she does and I do not care. It is enough to know that she does. ![]() ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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