Me,the ground,the sea,the sun

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Open Poetry #2

Me,the ground,the sea,the sun

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-09-14 09:20 PM

I awake to her the chirp of birds,
to hear them singing those wonderful words,
that make me rise to my feet,
and go out and then I meet,
the lovely sound and lovely place,
that opens my ears and sooths my face,
the wind that is against my skin,
my skin so bare and when,
I look at the ground,oh so wet,
and then I know why it's left,
that I may walk a top my feet,
and then the earth and I shall meet,
we melt together and then become one,
me, the ground, the sea, the sun.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-14 09:26 PM

Very lovely, Sundance, I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

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Denise

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

2 posted 1999-09-14 09:27 PM

thanks

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

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3 posted 1999-09-15 08:20 PM

anyone else?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-15 08:26 PM

Very beautiful!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

5 posted 1999-09-19 04:35 PM

thanks!

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

6 posted 1999-09-19 04:50 PM

A lovely poem! You are evoking the imagery very well in this poem, with the environment seeming to blend in. I could feel it. When I read poems, I try to "sense" something... some kind of vision. Nice ambience, Sundance! Your name is fitting.

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

7 posted 1999-09-19 05:03 PM

thank-you!

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

8 posted 1999-09-24 07:54 PM

Anyone else?

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