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I Humbly Wait(ForDBeth re 'They Say')
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I Humbly Wait(ForDBeth re 'They Say') |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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Your doubt, your pain, I understand -I humbly wait - to take your hand The world is dark and harsh - I know Beneath its scourge - I feel each blow. For each tear shed - I shed one too Please come to me - I'll comfort you; Within these arms of love you'll find Sure respite kind - true peace of mind. And when the storms of life assail This love of Mine shall never fail; I'll be your anchor sure and true And through each gale - I'll go with you. You have been hurt - that's understood But all your pain - I'll work for good And though men's evil I've not wrought I've shed My blood - redemption bought... To loose the chains - to set souls free To rise above life's storm-tossed sea; There's much the mind can't understand; Just so much pain it can withstand. My humble heart cries out to you; I gave My all - My life - it's true; Your grief, your fear, I understand... I offer you - the Master's hand. ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-25-1999).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
D, I love it-it really touched me. Thank you for posting. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
that's beautiful and so comforting. |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Beautiful! But maybe some different wording on the last stanza in the 2nd part. But over all it was so comforting and beautiful!!!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you all for reading and commenting. I just want to share His love. We all need it so badly.  ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Gorgeous. Very well written, Denise! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Very nice poem. I really liked this one. Thank you. Tyson |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...oooops! Thanks Severn & Tyson you're sweet ------------------ Denise |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
All my life I have believed and served that Heart of Hearts...but...life has seemed to prove to me an otherwise reality. Your words were beautiful.I still would wish them to be true-but it's been raining for too long now. Paul ------------------ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for reading and commenting, Paul. I much appreciate it! I'm sorry for your rain. I wish you fairer skies and brighter days! Pehaps this would help. Isn't reality multi-faceted? Perhaps the facet we look at is the reality that we experience. I try to filter everything through His purpose and providence. No one's life is perfect and pain free. What we can glean from our own personal circumstances, when placed in His hands, can lead to peace of heart and mind. I wish you better days, Paul. Thanks again for your words. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise...how beautifully stated, I think faith is all that has gotten me by on some days...for without faith, we are nothing. Paul, I hope you find light amoung the clouds very soon now. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you Hoot. I share your sentiments. BTW - LOVE your signature line! ------------------ Denise |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thank you for replying to my poem.It was very nicely written.I just can't bring myself to believe in something I have never seen.Sorry it took me so long to get back to you guys.Very nice poem Denise. DBeth ------------------ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You're quite welcome, DBeth, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I just found this tonight and am going to keep it, because it's something I need to remember!   ~ElizabethWaited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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