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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
You see me every day, Pass me along your way. But do you really see me there, Or is that just an empty stare? For hours we sit and talk, Sometimes, we take long walks. Do you really hear, Or am I speaking to deaf ears? You know who I am, call me a friend. But do you really know me, my friend? When you look into my eyes, Tell me, what do you see? Is it a reflection of you ... or one of me? ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Bravo! Can I have a second helping of your work?  ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
What a poem! This is great ... good rhyme, and a powerful message ... bravo, encore! Back to the top where it belongs! Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Thank you! Sax: I do have other posting they have been pushed backed because of new postings, and I plan to post more of my work as I feel the urge. I'm very glad you liked it. Nocht: Thanks for pushing me back to the top. I'm glad you think my work is good enough for a second look. Starith ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written. I'm glad I took a second look at this piece. BRAVO!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Hoot I am honored to have received such high praise from a poet such as yourself...thank you. Starith ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Excellent, indeed. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Like, like, like!! Very well done, Starith. |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Thank you for your high praise...I'm glad you appreciated my poem. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Very well written Starith...It flowed right through.. ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
These are very honest thoughts that I believe we all ponder..... Wow!!! To go back through these old blue pages!!! It's amazing how the time flies by too quickly anymore!!!! Hope you are well!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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