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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-09-14 01:08 PM


Touch me
And feed the fire's longing
Fly high upon each spark
Frenzied flight
And float without effort
Into the clandestine night
With me

Kiss me
A simple act which glistens
Dancing deep below the
Star-field ceiling
Feel the supernova's jealousy
Behind hald-shuttered eyes
With me

See me
Don't let the bright lights
Fool you, trust in shadows
Look into my eyes
Step onto the stage
And join Life's one-act
With me

Alicat, the severely twitterpated

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-09-14 02:41 PM


Such compelling words of love, and happy musings...all which we shall make into reality soon. All such things I will do, and with all my heart.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-09-14 03:41 PM


Alicat,
That's a pretty good meow. Enjoyed the poem.

Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
3 posted 1999-09-14 03:46 PM


very lovely, indeed, an offering of ones self, and very beautifully done!
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-03-05 10:51 AM


Thirty2
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