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Open Poetry #2

Innocent

MsLola
New Member

since 1999-09-14

Posts 5
Campbell, CA

0 posted 1999-09-14 12:52 PM

It was just an innocent review
Look, read, move on
I swear, that was the intent
But, then I was struck,
By this kind warm smile
The kind you see,
And feel,
Way inside.
I took a little chance,
Wrote a little note
Took a bigger chance,
And sent it.
He responded
It was just an innocent note
We began to correspond
He wanted to hear my voice
Just an innocent call
That's all it was to be
We talked,
It became more, much more
We wrote question after question,
Answer after answer
We found ourselves waiting,
Where is the mail?
We had to meet,
We did.
It was wonderful…..
You know when it all clicks
It clicked
Time has passed
And it has grown
This wonderful feeling
Now we wait,
Wonder,
And see where it leads
Stop analyzing,
Continue trusting
Feel good
Be happy…………..

(to be continued)

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-09-14 01:01 AM

OH...I like this....a good poem and a romantic mystery! I look forward to the next installment!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-14 09:38 AM

Looking forward to part two and hoping for a happy ending

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

3 posted 1999-09-14 01:41 PM

Me too...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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