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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I've been drifting in a sea of discourse. Knowing fully and not giving a damn. Wishing for wind to blow me off this course, Because I don't even know where I am. Drowning with no motivation to swim. Drifting without having a reason why. Sinking each time that I think about him. Too much salt in the sea to let me cry... I hear voices telling me to move on. I search for strength to turn over and swim. It's so far away- how can I go on? I have to- I need to get over him. Oh, the dreaded time has finally come. I must swallow this dose of lithium. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Slam! The sound of my expectations getting dashed, my dear. NOT what I expected at all, for that and other things, I thank you, my Lady. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-13-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You're welcome for the surprise! However, I didn't intend it to be one. Just sort of flowed through my fingers, you know? ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Och! ~ wow, girl... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You blew me away!!!!: So sad. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Satiate and Isis!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 09-14-99).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
One Voice, Excellent, One of your best. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Seymour, thank you very much! (Do you really think so?)------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
well written one voice...Very sad..  -sigh-It really gave me that helpless sense of drowning...Thanks for sharing it.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel the same way |
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