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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-09-13 08:03 PM

There's No Rainbow

Looking out to the Horizon
Over this great blue Ocean
This time, the Sun is shining
So Bright
It's blinding

Last time
I was freezing cold
There was a beautiful Rainbow
On the other side a pot of Gold
I knew our love would grow

Here at this place again
This time, there's no Rainbow
That path has come to an end
And my heart has lost it's glow

As I sit here and receive
The sun's passionate kiss
My Love, I do believe
This Heart O'mine you'll miss

I go over your letters
Letters of hope and Love
You were my one and only
Sweet Angel from above

I look up to the Cobult Blue sky
A Tear dwell's within my eye
Letting out a defeated Sigh....
I fall to my knees and cry

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 1999-09-13 08:10 PM

and here I am...not sure I'm the 'pot of gold' though, I suspect not...but each new day has the option of being one...I hope your tomorrow brings that to you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-09-13 08:12 PM

A lost love is always so sad. Well written.
But you will have a greater love one day, the love of your child. It's a bigger and different love than that for a man, and equally if not more rewarding.
Thanks for sharing. I saw you on the cliff face.......:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 1999-09-13 08:15 PM

I hope that you find your rainbow and pot of gold, Dark Angel. You wrote a wonderful poem about losing your love. The emotion is very deep.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-09-13 08:29 PM

Well now, soul-sister. Quite a farewell you present.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 1999-09-13 09:02 PM

Rainbow Girl, thank you so much

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Isis, I do have the love of my child, and it is the grandest most greatest love I have ever known

This poem was not written for a man but for
another woman (oops)
Isis... I saw you too

Thanks so much
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Thank you Elizabeth

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Soul-Brother thank you, and yes it is time for farewell, thanks so much for your support

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-23 02:14 PM

this hits home

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