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RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

0 posted 1999-09-13 04:34 PM

She danced for him
with her eyes
every part of her swayed
his eyes met hers with every sigh

She danced for him
with her smiles
every part of her swayed
his smiles joining hers cross the miles

She danced for him
with her lips
every part of her swayed
he joining her with his hips

She danced for him
with her soul
every part of her swayed
his became whole

She danced for him
with her heart
every part of her swayed
his love tearing them apart

She danced for him
with her tears
every part of her still
but the magic of love lingers here

(ok, I got told off for removing it..lol)

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-14-99).]

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

1 posted 1999-09-13 04:54 PM

*sigh* very beautiful, RG, a beautiful picture of how a woman offers her all to the object of her love, and still......well, here's big hugs!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-13 04:55 PM

Touching Rainbow!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-09-13 05:01 PM

Rainbow, I like, I like, I like! Good job!

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

4 posted 1999-09-13 06:24 PM

Thanks...:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-14-99).]

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-09-13 08:30 PM

Keep dancing..keep smiling and most of all, keep writing!

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

6 posted 1999-09-13 11:09 PM

Very nice. It started by making me smile thinking of all those wonderful times. By the end I was sighing thinking of all those... well, you get the idea. Well written and thanx for the trip through your mind.

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Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing.

JTF
Member

since 1999-08-09

Posts 319
France

7 posted 1999-09-14 08:18 AM

RG, I'm glad I had the privilege to read it before you deleted it ... but I understand why you did so ...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 1999-09-14 09:48 AM

Oh....I missed it.

Always a day late and a dollar short

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

9 posted 1999-09-14 11:05 AM

Thanks for your comments and sorry I deleted it...put it down to hormones..*g*

Hugs all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 1999-09-14 11:07 AM

Now who'd do such a thing as tell you off? *G* (innocently polishing my halo)

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

11 posted 1999-09-14 11:13 AM

Well now, to tell the truth, it's you...LOL

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

12 posted 1999-09-14 11:20 AM

lol, well heres a hug, she does the same thing to me when I am tempted to remove one and from me, thanks for putting it back it is not only well written, but a beautiful glimpse into you

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