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You'll Be In My Heart
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You'll Be In My Heart |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My doubts wash away in a flood of peace. Love and laughter gave me a merry chase. In you I have at last found my surcease. I whisper sweet words to your photograph. My eyes spill over with fresh tears of love. For the first time in years I dare to laugh. I give heartfelt thanks to the Lord above. Night finds me listening to our song. I ride on the waves of it's melody. Within my heart do you truly belong. You ease it's longing ache for threnody. Love surpasses my every written word. My voice therefore shall never go unheard. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This speaks volumes of the two of you..such sweet words penned in her name. Makes me smile.  |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream, this is definitly your best sonnet ever! I had tears in my eyes reading it... Your hard work and effort, I know, are in there, but you make it seem so easy! I must be the luckiest gal in the forum to have your attention! Thank you...------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Love surpasses my every written word!! You have a style that is unsurpassed !! I love to read your work... ------------------ Helewes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dream, you never cease to amaze me you know Love surpasses my every written word,WOWI love it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It says so much. Another enjoyable read, DreamEvil-this was just gorgeous. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
your very best, my friend. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
this was beautiful dream, so tender. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! Perhaps you should put together a book of just your sonnets..seems you can write these as well or better than your other styles....  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you all very much. Lady deVine, if I get a few more requests like yours I will do so. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very pretty!!! Thanks Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Please add my request ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So truly romantic! ------------------ Denise |
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