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Open Poetry #2

Sit beside me...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-02 01:47 PM

Sit beside me, burn inside me, I just need you near
Have some pity, you are witty and you have no fear
Hide me... hide me! Hide me silence I’m still afraid
You’re so pretty, help me city, I must face my fate

I’m burning from desire, but this fire feels so cold
Cupid’s arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world
Higher... higher... take me higher! This is not enough
I was honored with great sorrow I’m alone in love

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-02 02:48 PM

Very masterful, Master! I enjoyed this very much! 'Cupids arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world' is absolutely wonderful!!

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Denise

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-09-02 03:20 PM

Thanks dsnyder! That my favorite line also.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 1999-09-06 12:57 PM

Ohhhhhh!!!!!

I really liked this!!!

Thanks!!

Jusbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-09-06 01:05 AM

Thank you Justbleu! I'm glad you liked it.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-09-06 09:29 AM

Master,
I cannot say it better then dsnyder.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-09-06 11:17 AM

THank you both!

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I fell in love and kept on falling

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-04-16 11:47 PM

good to read the old ones of yours

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