Open Poetry #2 |
I have never |
DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
I have never seen a mountain top, Or an ocean bright and blue. I have never felt cool rain drops, Or laid my eyes on you. I have never seen a snow white dove, Or leaves fall from the trees. I have never had a chance to love, Or to grow and play,or be. I have never known the hurt you feel, Or the pain thats there to stay. I have never had my heart to heal, It will never go away. When I look up to the stars and say I love you,in a whisper. I wish you well,and hope you know,this comes from little sister. (For my sister Stephanie) Love,Dara Beth ------------------ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Positively beautiful - I hope she's had the pleasure of reading this....I can't believe you didn't get any responses, so I'm kicking it back to the top!! Keep writing ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thank you Poet! My sister died when she was a baby.I never had a chance to tell her how I felt about her.I would have gladly taken her place.Babies are so precious,ya know? Thanks again for your wonderful comments,very much appreciated! DBeth ------------------ |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
What? No more comments? he-he-he-he-he!!!!(smile!) DBeth ------------------ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DBeth, It's a good poem and I too don't know why the poor responce, so with this we'll kick it up to the top again. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, indeed, DBeth! I'm sure she's smiling down on you!! ------------------ Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
'Tis lovely, DBeth...precious thoughts of your sister. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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