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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Smooth with water going down Ironically takes o'er my crown Inebriating parts of me Slows me down, making me dizzy Pushing sleep upon my brain And taking over every vein I fight with vigor, aimlessly To keep from fading, tastelessly Can't concentrate or focus in On things that lie here deep within But oh, it's sweet to feel so numb Instead of terrified and dumb And oh, it's sweet to sanctify My body with this bottle dry Oh, it's sweet to feel this way Wish I could do this every day For now, I'll screw the lid back on Of Sweet, Sublime, Don Perignon ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I can think of many ways to alleviate many things. One in thing particular seems to be a sovereign remedy for most of what ails me. Care to guess what that is? ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-13-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Uh..... hehehe *whispers into DreamEvil's ear* Am I right? LOL ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is a good one one voice makes me lips dry |
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Lady Timberland New Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 3 |
Completely true for parts of society today and well written. I myself do know about days like these in which I must dwindle down this lonely road. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you all for your praises! I actually wrote this while nursing a cold, intoxicated by TheraFlu (good stuff ain't it?) and I just figured a bottle of wine sounded much more dramatic than TheraFlu. Don't cha think? hehehe ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So glad the Thera-flu inspired this !! Really made me want to read it over and over. Thanks for sharing your Talent!! ------------------ Helewes [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 09-13-99).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
one voice, Good job enjoyed the read, wish you the best of good health. Which remainds me I just wrote one on drinking, I'll put it on. *L* |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Highly amusing and very nicely crafted.Quite a hoot! ------------------ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanks to all of yaz!  Seymour: Thanks... I'm getting better slowly but surely... Doesn't it seem like the older you get, the harder it is to kick a cold? ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
hehehe...girl! And here I'm sittin, inebriated on my own cup 'o thera flu...and you're right..a bottle of wine does sound more..hmmm...poetic (hehehe) but in the state I'm in now, it would all taste the same.Hopes ya feel better soon! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanks Satiate! I hope you feel better soon as well! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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