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Open Poetry #2

Broken Yearning

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-09-12 09:37 PM

I yearn to be with you,
do you even know?
How much I love you,
I can't let you go.

I follow you everywhere,
you go along without a care,
but you don't know I love you,
It is so not fair!

I continue to love you,
but you break the yearn,
I wish you wouldn't,
when will you learn?

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-09-12 09:55 PM

I know just how this feels, Sundance. Sometimes people just cannot take a hint. If this is about your life, then good luck.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-12 09:59 PM

I remember those days and I'm glad they're just a memory! Nice poem!

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Denise

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

3 posted 1999-09-13 08:22 PM

Thanks u guys!

Emmy
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since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

4 posted 1999-09-13 08:34 PM

I can't help but wonder if this was written about anyone in particular... Was it? Whatever your answer... this was good. I liked the title too. Alas for all of us who feel the feelings expressed in this poem...

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

5 posted 1999-09-13 08:35 PM

Phil of course!

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

6 posted 1999-09-14 09:07 PM

anyone else?

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 1999-09-14 09:25 PM

Alas, the pain when they are too blind or too dumb to see.
Well done..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

8 posted 1999-09-14 09:28 PM

thanks a bunch!

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