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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-09-12 06:48 PM

Once upon a memory,
...was captured by your charms,
Eidetically envision,
...your beauty in my arms,
My eyes drink of your loveliness,
...the grace of supple limb,
Sweet creature from the welkin blue,
...angelic seraphim,
As petals of the satin rose,
...I smell your fragrant scent,
Caress the smoothness of your skin,
...my goddess heaven sent,
I whisper softly as we part,
...I'll love you evermore,
Keep me in your heart forever,
...my humble plea implore,
I kiss you gently on the lips,
...gaze into your eyes,
Once upon a memory,
...I touched upon the skies.

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

1 posted 1999-09-12 06:49 PM

"Once upon a memory" - lovely.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-09-12 07:05 PM

Wonderful! No other words left...

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-09-12 07:07 PM

Mike, this is beautiful and very well written....I am saving this in my favorite files

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 1999-09-12 07:09 PM

a most romantic piece...I thoroughly enjoyed reading this

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-09-12 07:09 PM

Poetry at its finest - I'll say it again!
Very well done!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-09-12 08:52 PM

Wow...this is esqusite. The rhythm and rhyme are very good. Thanks for posting

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

7 posted 1999-09-12 11:23 PM

Thank you for your gracious comments.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 1999-09-16 07:32 AM

Quite wonderful indeed!!! So pretty!!

Thank You1!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

MissQ
Junior Member

since 1999-09-16

Posts 12
Clarksdale, MS 38614

9 posted 1999-09-16 11:14 AM

"Sweet dreature from the welken blue"....I love that line....beautiful words you have

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 1999-09-16 06:33 PM

Geesh, Mike - You're just too darned good...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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11 posted 2004-04-23 01:36 PM

beautiful

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