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The sigh of you
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The sigh of you |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
The sigh of you What is this world today, Is it different from yesterdays? I count todays, 'til you arrive, Always waiting, For you will come, Your silent promise. What did we miss? Was it a lot? That time together, so blurry Erased, and left only with the sigh of you. What did we do? Did we save the world? Or was that just a dream, a nightmare. I can feel you in the dark, Your mind alone, Next to mine, Whispering your promise. Should I wait much longer? Will my will go on? Every year, Hoping, Searching, for the sigh of you. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Much longing here...beautiful. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....I am awed by the sense of longing in this piece. Again, very nicely done. ------------------ "The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, great title too!  ------------------ Denise |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Thank you again. I really appreciate it. Tyson |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is truly beautiful, it left me sighing... |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Severn, Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. I don't get to thank enough of you individually. I lack the extra time this week to visit here for long, but when I do I like to just say thanks. Tyson |
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