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Tisha Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12Weedsport, NY |
ALONE After all is gone After the voices end I sit alone After loving words come After loving words go I sit alone This life should have been a good one This life should have made me smile I am alone As the sunshines try to beam into the puddles in my life And the breese gently carress my skin I am alone A glimmer of sunshine A glimmer of hope A time spent in laughter, to cherish at most Yet still, I am alone Alone is my destiny Alone is my hope Alone is the feeling restless consuming still an ending I sit alone |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sad ------------------ "The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice Tisha and very true, for when all is said and done, are we not all in some way alone with ourselves? I liked this one alot!  ------------------ Denise |
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BoyToy Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23everett, wa, usa |
Tisha, You are a very talented and special person. Someday your Prince Chraming will arrive and sweep you off your feet, then you will never have to feel alone again. I feel that this will happen for you sometime before the end of November. Good Luck |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was sad...but I liked it!! The more I read the more I hope people realize how similar we as people really are!! I do not think there is anyone in this life who at one time or another has not felt what you have portrayed here!! Thank You for the reminder!!! Well done!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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