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Open Poetry #2

never be

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-09-10 09:37 PM

I'll never ever be,
a person who can do poetry.
Although I do it under a tree,
the thought of me and poetry,
is so unlike anything of me,
but wait and you'll just see.

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

1 posted 1999-09-10 09:44 PM

This is a poem that came off the top of my hea and I don't have time to revise it, so suggestions are good!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-11 02:34 PM

Sundance, this is cute. It has great potential. When you have some time, I'd love to see what you can make of this!

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Denise

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

3 posted 1999-09-12 09:26 PM

thanks,but right now I'm working on some other stuff,so I will later!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 1999-09-16 07:38 AM

I agree...I will wait patiently and see!!
I like what you have here....

I hope to read more from you!!!

Thank You

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

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