Open Poetry #2 |
Please don't stare |
DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
The lady in the wheelchair Sits silently alone. People walk by staring They think she doesn't know. Her mind is not afflicted It's her legs that do not work. Mobility is restricted Her legs will sometimes jerk. So do not be affraid to ask Why she is in that chair. She would gladly tell you why She just wishes you wouldn't stare. This is for my mom Loyce. ------------------ |
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Dumblon New Member
since 1999-09-10
Posts 6Erie, PA |
this one is good. interesting that when I worked at a bus company for the handicapped, this is how many of my customers felt. it is hard to change people's habits, but it should begin at the home. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Fabulous message you have here ! Very nice poem too! You're right, we are all guilty of looking at eachother through critical eyes....you're right for writing this for your mom in her defense - BRAVO ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully done and what a message you present here. Amazing how people can be so cruel. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully written message! Children have the right idea when it comes to this type of situation. They ask! We hush them so as not to offend anyone, but how much wiser to just ask! (I'm sure your mom is proud of you for this poem!) |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
good read, I hope it was not to painfull to write. But I'm glad You did |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done DBeth. My best to you and your mom. My neighbor out back is also in a wheelchair. She was shot in the back by her ex. Very sad. But she is pleasant and cheerful and grateful to be alive. She is one of the nicest people that I have ever met! Again, well done and God bless you and your mom! ------------------ Denise |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thanks for all the comments, GREATLY appreciated!The world would be a much nicer place if everyone could overlook peoples handicaps. we all have'em.It seems children are the only ones that don't have a problem with it.Getting pleasure from someone else's pain is so cruel.They don't choose to be in that situation.As for me,I look at them no different.They have feelings just like everyone else. Thanks again for the wonderful comments! DBeth ------------------ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DBeth, Nice message good poem. |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thank you seymour!Appreciate your comment. HUGS DBeth ------------------ |
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