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Open Poetry #2

Exodus

Lucy
New Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 1
Arcata, CA USA

0 posted 1999-09-12 01:19 AM

Rays of sunlight
on a pale cheek,
Eyes squinting,
turned against the sky
Cannot recall the last moment
of light
Seen,
Felt,
Cherished
Too many days spent
Autonomous and lost in the blinding darkness.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-12 01:28 AM

Nicely written Lucy

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-09-12 12:04 PM

oooohhhh look out! now there are two of us.. we are gonna set this forum on its ear.

I really liked you poem Lucy.

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