Open Poetry #2 |
The Dream That Ended Too Soon |
HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
Gradually dusk falls upon the land, Engulfing the world in darkness. No longer can you see the sun, The midnight hour is upon us. A cold wind sweeps down through the streets, Whilst I lie awake in bed, And I must pull tight the sheets, And rest my weary head. Then I slowly close my eyes, And dream of you and me. The stars soon cover the night sky, They are the only light you can see. And I am safe and warm inside, When I'm dreaming of the things that could be. Where there is nothing we can hide. Then I see your handsome face And we are in eachothers arms, Feeling secure in our embrace, Protected from all harm. Then slowly the darkness fades away, And light fills my quiet room. What was night has turned into day. My dream was over too soon. ------------------ Heather C. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, beautiful piece, HCwildchild. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
HC, loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
Thanx guys (hugs) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Heather! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Nice dream...wish I could dream one like that. Though my hubby would probably wake me up asking what was up. LOL Very Nice!!! |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
That is a nice poem! I actually had one of those dreams. It's a give a great feeling afterwards. =) ------------------ TrulĀ„ PreciouĀ§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
Thanx ------------------ Heather C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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