Me Loves Him (a little humor)

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DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

0 posted 1999-09-11 08:44 PM

Me loves him as if him were dirt.Me did not know him were a flirt.Oh,gosh!Oh,gee!How me loves he, and he loves she and she aint me.Darn! Me hate him, wish him die.Said him love me but him lie.Love is love and always was,Me get him back me always does! (No special meaning,Just thought it was cute.)

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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

1 posted 1999-09-11 09:02 PM

DBeth.. we love your poetry.. don't take this the wrong way ok?

Me loves him as if him were dirt.(return key)
Me did not know him were a flirt. (return key)
Oh,gosh!Oh,gee!How me loves he, (return key)
and he loves she and she aint me. (return key)
Darn! Me hate him, wish him die. (return key)
Said him love me but him lie. (return key)
Love is love and always was, (return key)
Me get him back me always does (return key)

When typing your poem into the little "POST NEW TOPIC BOX" if you hit the enter/return key after each line of poetry, it makes it so much easier to read. And softens the blow to those of us poets who are anal retentive about structure..

Just a suggestion.. hehe

oh.. and by the way.. I love this.. too cute.

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-11-99).]

DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

2 posted 1999-09-11 09:15 PM

Thanks, I didn't know what I was doing wrong.Thanks again for the tip.
he,he,he,he,he
DBeth

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-11 10:14 PM

Cute!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-11 10:34 PM

I had to laugh at this. This was really cute, and humerous!

U K Hero
Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 266
England

5 posted 1999-09-12 09:41 AM

You made me :-)

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 1999-09-15 06:10 PM

Gosh...Me loved it!!

Tank U!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

7 posted 1999-09-15 06:32 PM

Me loves it too! But not as if it was dirt.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 1999-09-15 07:09 PM

DBeth,
Well you got me to, I mean too, I mean two.
Oh hell it was a great poem.

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