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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 1999-09-11 06:42 PM


Give Me Your Love

Give me your love,
And I will give you mine,
Today and tomorrow,
Till the end of time.

Give me your love,
Soft and gentle as the rain;
Put your arms around me
And soften all my pain.

Give me your love,
As I give mine to you,
Strong and enduring
Always free and true.

Give me your love,
More as time goes by,
And I will give you my love
Until the day I die.

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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1 posted 1999-09-11 06:49 PM


Hoot, this was beautiful! I really liked this! You are so good with words!
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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2 posted 1999-09-11 06:51 PM


Very beautiful Hoot!!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-09-11 08:16 PM


Lucie and Whtdove...thank you both

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Denise
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4 posted 1999-09-11 08:23 PM


Ahhh, true love! How lovely! Very good Hoot!

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Denise

Craig
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5 posted 1999-09-11 08:48 PM


I'm sold, just tell me where to send it!

Great poem.

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-11 08:55 PM


Denise...thank you

Craig, bring it on over...personal delivery would be best in my opinion

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Balladeer
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7 posted 1999-09-11 09:25 PM


Hoot, any man who would not accept an offer like that is a fool....but, then, there are a lot of fools, too, aren't there?
Alwye
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In the space between moments
8 posted 1999-09-11 09:45 PM


Hoot, this is a beautiful piece of work. Lovely!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
9 posted 1999-09-11 09:49 PM


Alwye, thank you

Balladeer....yes, if they banished the fools from the earth, the world would be an empty place

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Dark Angel
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10 posted 1999-09-11 09:53 PM


hoot, this is beautiful, couldn't have said it better myself

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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