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The Ocean Breeze
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The Ocean Breeze |
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Tisha Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12Weedsport, NY |
Somehow a sense of fear overwhelms me, yet thoughts of you remind me quickly of peace and love The sand is hot beneath my feet - swiftly I reach the water; it cools me The commanding waves thrash against my body and impulse of defeat consumes me My thoughts reach quickly for you - your strength reages through my soul and again I am comforted by peace A peace I can only imagine and long for A peace which this commanding sense can't bring A peace with which the sunset will set a blaze A peace again cooled by a gentle breeze and that gentle breeze again reminds me of you... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I love the ocean so I had to read this! Very nice - I like the feeling especially in the first 2 lines....very good description! I felt I was there ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yup, Very good write!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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