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caroline
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since 1999-08-16

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0 posted 1999-09-11 01:44 PM

Look at love lowered
into my heartbeat as
music composed before
pink light from dawn
Gift by night revealed
joy comes in sunlight
Life songs you sing ~
music named within
wished peace
I accept with grateful honor
Wings borrowed from
freedom fly in
returned light so that
we always share our
sweet song as one

caroline 1999
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~~~Kisses to Dieu for his gift of friendship~~~

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-11 01:56 PM

Very lovely, Caroline. I enjoyed this!

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Denise

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

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2 posted 1999-09-11 04:53 PM

Thanks Denise! He is a good friend, very very dear to my heart. I wish I could translate this to his native language as a surprise for him...but it is not easy to do..the words don't have the same meanings. Good thing he's bilingual!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-11 06:17 PM

Nicely written Caroline!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-09-11 09:42 PM

He is a lucky man to be a friend of yours, Caroline.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-09-11 11:45 PM

Very unusual! I like this one a lot!

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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6 posted 1999-09-12 01:12 AM

My humble thanks...praise coming from such talented poets as all of you means much to me.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-09-12 04:03 AM

This is stunning. An unusual combination of images that flows like water - I like!

passing shadows
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