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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-11 03:36 AM

I'm sitting here bored
with nothing to do,
just chatting with friends
and thinking of you.

Poems I've written
and to some replied,
my verse comes from the
passion you supplied.

Forgive me my doubts,
for going unheard,
because my heart shouts,
they were so absurd.

My eyes may wander,
and my heart may stray,
I no longer doubt,
that with you I’ll stay.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-09-11 03:41 AM

Are you sick or something boy!

J/K
Cute, that's all I'll say!

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-09-11 03:49 AM

I have to laugh at Christopher! lol Very romantic indeed, Dream!

You're very sweet!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

3 posted 1999-09-11 03:50 AM

Dream: "My eyes may wander,and my heart may stray"..Romantic??????....ooops

Hugs

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-09-11 03:52 AM

Bitten by the love bug perhaps Christopher, but hardly sick.

One voice, sweet is a word I've seldom heard describing me. Thank you.

Rainbow, hardly seems romantic I know, but consider that my eyes and heart always return.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-11-99).]

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

5 posted 1999-09-11 10:43 AM

AH your romantic side is showing! Hallmark time prehaps? Good work!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-09-11 11:14 AM

I like it!!
Everyone needs to write a romantic ditty or 2 !!

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Helewes

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-09-11 01:39 PM

Love bug is a good thing! LOL Very nice poem!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-09-11 01:43 PM

Cute!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 1999-09-11 05:55 PM

Cute Dream...a side of you we don't often get a chance to view, makes for a nice change!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

10 posted 1999-09-15 02:50 PM

Ohhh that twas sweet...I liked it a lot!! Kinda sing-songy and dreamy!! Cool!!

Thanks again Dream...

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

11 posted 1999-09-15 02:57 PM

Nice work dream....I am looking forward to more of your talent....and hope ya add some humor to your expertise!!!

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