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Open Poetry #2

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Seward
New Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 4

0 posted 1999-09-10 03:44 AM

Let us
dive you
and I
into each
other
smother with
kisses
delicious

[This message has been edited by Seward (edited 09-10-99).]

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 1999-09-10 04:43 AM

Short, sweet, and to the point!

I LIKE!

INclan

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-10 02:26 PM

Smiles..now that paints a nice picture in very little words.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Seward
New Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 4

3 posted 1999-09-12 03:40 AM

Thank you both. I've been reading a lot of Robert Creeley and this is a very Creeley inspired piece - tight and efficient - I hope, at least.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-12 02:38 PM

Yes, I like this one!

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Denise

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

5 posted 1999-09-12 09:27 PM

I like, too!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-01-26 08:12 PM

Now that I know the man behind the name - I must say. This is not what I would expect from you my friend.

Tight it is.

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Gentleman Charles
New Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 4

7 posted 2000-01-30 05:57 PM

It sings its own song in its own harmony.

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