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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Visions [an exercise to Caroline’s challenge] Visions come to me in dreaming dreaming whiles the time away away on horses I shall ride far far into the cloudy heights heights which take me to my loving loving man of mine mine so warm, tender, handsome handsome being a state of mind. Mind now you, this way of dreaming, dreaming could be your escape escape to ‘what’ you may ask; ask away, come what may may your dreams always be visions. ©KRJ 9 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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This is beautiful Sunshine. Very dreamy!  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sunshine, very well written ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sunshine...I absolutely love this piece!! The format is great..using the last word of every line as the first word for the following line...great!! You did a wonderful job here. BRAVO!!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Go to Caroline's post in "Challenges" - this is where the format stemmed from! It is an interesting exercise, to say the least. Thanks for the comments! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh my...how did I ever miss THIS? It is wonderful, Sunshine! I should have known you would take the challenge and run with it Back to the top with this one, my dear! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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