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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-09-02 12:40 PM


Questions-
Roaming through my mind.
Some simple, others complex...
-all are insistent-
Do you know them?
Do you ask the same?
some-all-many-none
Confusion breaks,
like an early dawn, each time I wake.
Sometimes,
I lose myself,
-forget-
But not when you are near.
In your presence,
all control is blown away...
-dust in the wind of my heart-
All hope of resistance,
is nothing but a dim memory,
to be...
-re-created...
when you are gone.

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 1999-09-02 02:09 AM


How searching. I know that feeling! I like that poem! Hope you get your answers.
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 1999-09-10 10:02 AM



WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 1999-09-10 10:09 AM


Dust in the wind of my heart...Great touch!
Great poem! I've been here before!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-09-10 10:14 AM


Nicely written

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-09-11 03:15 AM


Thank you

caroline
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6 posted 1999-09-11 09:33 AM


Wow Christopher...blew me away like dust!
Love this!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

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