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stoney1
Junior Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 12
Wooster, Ohio, Wayne

0 posted 1999-09-09 09:03 PM


Love forgotten
Passions to hide
Pain of memories
I'm dying inside

Love forgotten
Heart felt sorrow
Love lost forever
Doesn't return tomorrow

Love forgotten
Dreams of the past
Love all around you
passions so vast

Love forgotten
Where nightmares hide
The garden of eden
My passion has died

Love forgotten
Dreams of desire
Spark of a memory
To relight my fire

Love forgotten
Endless dreams
I'm dying inside
Or so it seems

Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz

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Harold Amstutz

© Copyright 1999 stoney1 - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-09-09 09:25 PM


Sometimes when this "Love" can be lost so easily, it makes you wonder if it was over-rated.

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-09 09:40 PM


Nicely done Harold. I was especially touched by these four lines
"Love forgotten
Endless dreams
I'm dying inside
Or so it seems"

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-09 09:42 PM


Ditto! Yes, most excellent!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-12-24 11:08 AM


very good write

where are you lately?

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
5 posted 2004-12-24 07:30 PM


Wow.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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