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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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If I Could.... If I could turn back the clock and make everything new again The pain and misery I'll unlock Life will be better then If I could rewind the days That, I'd certainly do I'd bring back the sun rays to shine upon you If I could turn back the time To when you were well Everything would be fine In pain you'll no longer dwell If I could give you the world That I'd do too If I had a magic wand I'd give it all to you quote: [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-04-99).] [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-04-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wonderful sentiment my soul-sister. You've done well. Thank you ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Beautiful! The thought of a magic wand, and what anyone could do for another, but the magic we desire comes from a higher power, and only he knows if what we desire is able to be granted. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wouldn't it be wonderful sometimes to undo our wrongs and make them right. To turn back the clocks and start over again where we need to. You have displayed that idea vividly in this poem. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, you're most welcome, and Thank you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Lost Dreamer.  --------- hoot thank you and yes wouldn't it be wonderful [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-02-99).] |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
once again the beauty in your poetry has opened up a door for me. thank you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dark Angel....ya really don't know how much this poem brought thoughts to me....If I could roll time back, I'd bring back the life of those I've taken, I would have done so many things differently....I often visit my past...but I'd never want to live there again for sure...... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A wonderful poem with such a nice sentiment in it...if you turn back time for the object of this poem, could you buy some Yahoo stock for me while you're there?  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Miriam |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Toerag, Thank you. If I could go back in time, there would be alot things that I'd change as well. But then when I think about it, maybe not -------------------- Poet, sure no problem, just leave me a list lol And Thank you |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
How very sweet. This deserves another look. Back to the top with you! ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well done my friend! We can turn back the clock so to speak. That higher power when he forgives us we start anew. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Starith, Thank you ---------------- WhtDove, Thank you so much |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
If only we could turn back the clock! |
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