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Mike Pickering
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-04 12:33 PM


In dreams, I can see your face,
In dreams, I can feel your warm embrace,
In dreams, I feel so free,
In dreams, I know your proud of me,
In dreams, I can speak to you freely,
In dreams, the words come so easily,
In dreams, I can still talk to you,
In dreams, you see things the way I do,
In dreams, I see you happy,
In dreams, I wish I could be,
Because, In dreams, you are still with me.

In memory of my grandpa.

© Copyright 1999 Mike Pickering - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-04 12:41 PM


What a beautiful tribute!

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Denise

Mike Pickering
Junior Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA
2 posted 1999-09-04 12:44 PM


Thank you Denise. I'm glad you liked both of my poems.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-09-04 01:16 AM


This was a neat form! I liked it, well done!
Mike Pickering
Junior Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA
4 posted 1999-09-04 02:13 AM


Thank you dove.
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
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5 posted 1999-09-04 05:27 AM


I know the feeling well....dreams keep us close...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-09-04 08:28 AM


A very nice tribute indeed

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
7 posted 1999-09-04 01:01 PM


Lovely.
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