Open Poetry #2 |
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Alone Again |
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stoney1 Junior Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 12Wooster, Ohio, Wayne |
Here I am alone again All by myself without a friend From me to you I do confide All these feelings I've locked inside It hurt's so much I must admit To be alone this does not fit All this love I have to share I'd give to you without a care All my heart needs is you Not just anyone will do I need you there by my side To lose those feelings that I hide It's getting late I feel alone No one to call upon the phone Is there someone there for me I need someone to love you see I'm like a puppet on a shelf Feeling sorry for myself It's not my fault I'm all alone It didn't work out I should have known Here I am alone again All by myself without a friend From me to you I do confide All these feelings I've locked inside Here I am alone again Here I am alone again Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz ------------------ Harold Amstutz |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Very nice. I always have an affinity for poems that come full circle in thier form. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
What a sad place to find yourself...although I think we can all relate....I agree that a poem that comes full circle is so "complete"...great job! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Harold, your words are haunting and very touching. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
You just put my thoughts/feelings in your poem. Been there, done that. I can identify with this. Sad reading, but it was written from the heart, that makes it great! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yes, sad indeed...But well said.. ![]() |
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