Open Poetry #2 |
Shining (repost) |
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
SHINING I am Darkness, I am shadow, I am an uncried tear. She is brightness, she is the glow - Of sunshine ever near. I am sadness, melancholy, I am the voice of rain. She is gladness, she is folly, The recompense of pain. I am torture, I am shame, I am the touch of sorrow. She is pleasure. Passion untame, She is hope for tomorrow. I am alone, and in my fear - I am as cold as ice. She is comfort, warm and dear, A glimpse of paradise. And yet somehow our souls connect - In the lucidity of dream. Where a magic only her eyes reflect - Has made the Darkness gleam. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Michael, I loved this one last time around, and it still rings true now, great job! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Back to the Top..... BTTT |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I never saw this one before but I like it alot. Opposites really do attract. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! I have a question....how is there darkness without light? If there is no light, no one would know there is darkness as there would be nothing to compare with it.. right? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoyed this!! A poem of 2 that complement!! Well Done!! Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I still find the magic in this even after reading it the second time, still beautifully written! Glad to see it in this "other" forum. ***curtsies ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
another deserving poem, so up it goes to the top. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wow....nice |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Michael, back to the top for you.. I am in awe...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"I am sadness, melancholy, I am the voice of rain. She is gladness, she is folly, The recompense of pain." Awesome lines, Michael...whatever else this liason has certainly given you a wealth of heartsongs! ;-) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I missed this the first time around...glad I caught it the second ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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