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To love you completely
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To love you completely |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean 
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To love you completely I'm not sure it could be Too much is standing Between you and me I give you as much As my heart will allow To love you more I'm not sure I know how It would mean sacrificing On someone else's part I couldn't live with myself For breaking their heart I could not ask you To let me be first I'd rather leave and Be the one to hurt worst Caught between the two evils Can make it seem wrong But what I feel in my heart Is too powerful and strong Let me love you for now If only for a small time Let me know in my heart That you'll always be mine |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Deb this is beautiful and I think many poeple have been where this poem is coming from... you have written it so well.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Yes indeed! I think a lot of people can relate to this one! I am surprised their aren't more comments than this. You wrote this very well!!! I enjoyed reading it! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I can relate to this so well. Nicely done. |
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