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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Shelter ~What you are to me is so much more than what words describe. ~A feeling that is so strong it can only be felt from deep inside. ~When the rain pours and the sky turns black, ~Will you take my hand? ~Run through the rain? ~Never look back? ~If the world came tumbling down, even the sun, ~Would you be there to shelter me? ~As I would you? ~Like a mother bird's wing for her young? ~A filthy world filled with greed and hate, ~Pushes us down. ~Alone we are strong, ~Together we fall no shorter than great. ~From the plentiful sufferings others are subdued, ~Pushed way down. ~How do they survive it? ~What everyone needs is a friend like you... ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Keeper this is marvelous. I especially like the line 'Together we fall no shorter than great'. Fabulous! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Deep meaning, few words! Great Job! |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
thanks a lot guys, that means a lot. I'm glad i FINALLY got some response on this forum, nobody ever replies, thank you so much, im glad you enjoyed. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Profound emotions, described in few words..Well done Keeper..  ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keeper, Enjoyed the read, good job. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
thanks everyone..seriously ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
As always....I love your writing!! It touches my heart everytime!!! Thanks!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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