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Open Poetry #2

I Believe

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-09-07 07:38 PM

I believe there'll come a night
When you will return,
To kindle once again,
The Flame that used to burn.

You'll come to me one night
And gently take my hand,
You'll need no words to tell me
For I will understand.

And you will lead me silently
To a special place,
Where once again I shall know
The warmth of your embrace.

And somehow without words
To explain the love inside
We will know the truth
That we have long denied.

And perhaps it's in my fantasies
Never to occur
But I believe we'll love again
And be the way we were.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-07 10:32 PM

This is absolutely beautiful, Isis. I enjoyed reading this one very much!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-07 10:48 PM

I'm in agreement with D up there! This was just beautiful!

Well written!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-08 08:12 AM

Very nicely written Isis...the rhythym and rhyme work well and it flows nicely

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

4 posted 1999-09-25 08:29 AM

This deserves a second round of viewing for anyone who missed it as I did the first time around. Great job.

johnt300
Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 214
san diego, ca.

5 posted 1999-09-25 08:33 AM

I liked this one a lot. Much longing. Thank you.
Tyson

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-09-25 07:32 PM

Nice to see it bought back from the bowels as it were!!..:..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)

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