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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Two journeys ended today… and I am tired. One so long, so desired on the plot yet unreachable, hidden by stone walls and solid gates My feet never touched the sand of that land where I wanted to live… A journey within a journey, short, bittersweet to the corners of dark where I am guilty until proven the unbitch, and pleasing though the trip I will not beg my favor from victims nor thieves Two journeys ended today… another begins tomorrow but I am tired. caroline 1999 all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful thought Caroline...when a journey ends, always another begins ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you hoot...but today I hurt from the bottom of my feet, to the bottom of my heart, and I doubt that the sun will shine much tomorrow either. But I'll keep walking, no matter what. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your poetry is marvellous, Caroline. I hope we can give you some sunlight here - and some shade when it is too bright in the world outside... [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 09-07-99).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful work, Caroline. No destination is unreachable........some just take longer than others. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you Severn, and Sir Balladeer...but for tonight, I will just put my feet up and have a glass of wine...*LOL* I need it! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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