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Our Happiness |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
Our Happiness You doused me in your champagne hoping to extricate happiness from deep within my exterior smudged with sadness You managed to intoxicate my imagination and dance within my soul You eased my happiness out from within by caressing me with friendly conversation You served me with your finest manners chaperoned me to see your insights You gathered my whole being into your world where now our happiness is all that matters |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...very nicely done, I absolutely loved the way this was written "You managed to intoxicate my imagination and dance within my soul" Excellent lines!!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
hoot_owl_rn, Thanks for your raving review. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I loved it, I like your choice of words! Intoxicate my imagination! Well done! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very beautfully written.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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