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lets call it confusion
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lets call it confusion |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
lets call it confusion but its not, not really, I know what I want, I want you. I want your touch, my soul has finally found yours, friends for all time lovers not yet or shall I say, yet to be so why do I call it confusion? because I am weak and I know not how to hurt another who feels the same about me as I feel about you and I wonder if it is nothing but life turning around on me [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-07-99).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
gosh I just want to say that there are so many wonderful poems here, I could live here and live happy :-) glad I found you guys! |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
welcome iloveit. your poem is great!! you'll make really good friends here i promise. starting with m  [This message has been edited by miriam (edited 09-07-99).] [This message has been edited by miriam (edited 09-07-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to the group ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks guys.....I really like it here, I write in spurts usually, nothing for a while then lots....but thanks for the welcome hugs |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to the forum, A place that stands alone. A warm and caring place, Us poets call our home! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hi ya, Lovey I like this poem. It says a lot about indecision and need, and how they conflict with one another. Very nicely done. I especially liked the way you started out with a simple statement, and then recanted it with a definite statement of need and drive. Very alluring and powerful. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 09-08-99).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hey lj, you can analyze my poems any day, you make me sound like I know what I am doing, and hey, I kinda like that lol big big hugs! |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
ROFL @ "you make me sound like I know what I am doing" ... seeing the others you posted I must say it's a real good spurt ! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well, lol, I never really considered myself a poet, its just my heart pouring out onto the paper, but when Lj describes them, lol, he makes it sound like I thought about it and planned it like that lol thanks frog, good to see you here hugs |
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