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Open Poetry #2

To YOU the Reader

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

0 posted 1999-09-07 11:34 AM

I wrote down my thoughts, my emotions
You gave me some of your loves sweetest potion.

I gave you all my burdens to carry for a while
You did it, never taking back your smile.

I just recently joined the family
But still, i never want to leave.

Thank you all for taking the time,
To read my lame poetry and rhyme.

I want to be of use
To all that need a boost.

Thank you once again,
For being a great friend.

-turn that frown

upside down

- miriam

*for some reason, although i am registered under my personal email address my responses have been going to my sisters address. please make sure if and when you write back that you're writing to [email protected], and no one else.

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miriam coronado

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

1 posted 1999-09-07 11:41 AM

I liked this poem.. good job. And all are welcome here, except maybe that critic guy, cause he was mean! BOOOO down with mean people BOOOO.. hehe

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

2 posted 1999-09-07 11:44 AM

thanks lucie!

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Turn that frown :( upside down :)
miriam

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