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Oh now i got that durned song in my head(Challenge from good ole Alicat) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I watch as the bees perform I am beleaguered by their swarm The queens thought they both could rule The good nation of Istanbul Queen one is my mother in law In queen two my wife I saw Neither one was fit to rule The good nation of Istanbul I am Istanbul the untamed I am beleaguered by my fame The two queens should fight for me I think they are two wild and crazy bees My future has been foretold All the way until I get old Queen one my mother in law Likes to tell me what she saw Although queen one’s stinger grew My life is with my queen two My mother in law thinks she'll rule But my wife honeys Istanbul [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-02-99).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Istanbul was Constinople...hehehehehe...suffer Wonderful piece and I am very proud of you. You overcame the obstacles this challenge presented and did so in a very original, realistic manner...Vivant! Alicat |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Makes sense to me Walt, and yes, considering my current circumstances, I did smile a little.  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh dear.... LOL! You poor man. This was great entertainment!!! Very well written, Walt |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Love the way it was written and was very entertained. I wonder if my husband feels that way too....hmmmm...may have to ask him. LOL ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is sweet...and quite creative!!!! WOW this was very entertaining....enjoyed much!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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