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PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 1999-09-02 01:40 AM


Up in the morning, get the kids off to school.
"Son you can't take the rat"..."I know it's a dumb rule."
"Honey, get up"...The heater's down and we're cold."
"Alright, just a minute"...a blanket unfolds.
"Go change your skirt"....Wear something warmer."
"Where is your coat?"...It's at the Farmer's?!"
"Honey get up"...."It's so c-o-o-ld in here"
"Alright...just a minute." Can't get it in gear.
"Wear your old coat."...Missy those shoes won't do."
"I got your lunches and Son..where are your boots?"
"Honey get up"..."It's about time to go."
"Alright...just a minute" It's starting to snow.
"Kids...go get your books and get in the truck."
"Do you have your money?"...."Okay, here's a buck."
"Honey get up"...."You gotta whole lot to do."
"Babe....go without me."...."Hey"...."I love you."


8/14/89


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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


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Nan
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1 posted 1999-09-02 09:44 AM


....and that's the truth...
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
2 posted 1999-09-02 09:45 AM


Then ya remember it's Saturday!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-09-02 09:59 AM


Wildchild,
Sounds familiar, nice job.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
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Aloha, Oregon
4 posted 1999-09-02 10:08 AM


Thanks guys!! There is that huh Toerag but truth it still be...

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Denise
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5 posted 1999-09-02 10:15 AM


Aren't cold mornings just the worst?!
Very nicely done!

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 1999-09-03 10:32 PM


This was great! I could feel your rushing around, and all the craziness that goes with it. Nice job reflecting a day in the life of a busy family.

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

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