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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-09-06 12:52 PM

Uncaring
and
unforgiving
in thy
conquest;
unsatiable
in
thy
hunger
to devour all
that
is beautiful.
Curse thee.
Do
not you
realize
the
fire of man
is
not fanned
by
thy winds?
Curse thee.
Thou
may fade
the
garden's petals;
but
seeds of thought
shall
ever be
reborn
from
thy wretched soil.
Curse thee.
Necromancer,
in
thy battle
for
eternal domination
thou
hast
leveled mountains
and
gouged
the
deepest sea;
but
as
the Phoenix,
ever
shall
rise man.
Curse thee.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-06 08:16 PM

Excellent Mike! You capture time's curse well! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-06-99).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-09 08:04 PM

I think this should go back up to the top!

I think it got lost in the shuffle!

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Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-09-09 08:10 PM

Wow, this is great. I love the structure and the archaic language fits so well.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 1999-09-09 08:18 PM

Hear! Hear! Well Said! Liked the style and the feelings behind it all. Thanks to Lady D for bringing it back to the top.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-09-09 08:18 PM

See? I knew it was great!

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Denise

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-09-09 09:01 PM

Mike, so sorry I didn't see your poem about time and try to better it, I just did it, then started looking around and there you were.
Forgive me?

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-09-09 10:02 PM

Well done Mike....a very nice read indeed!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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