Too tired to title this one

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-06 11:53 AM

Come over here,
let me bend your ear
and tell you a story
of love
to rival the choir
of Heaven's desire,
taking flight
on the wings
of a dove.

I know just
what you think,
that one day
you'll blink
and find one day
that I'm gone.
Well, my dear,
never you fear.
You are totally,
helplessly,
wrong.

Who else
puts up
with my moods,
my wigged out views
and shares
their
heart with me?
Only you my one,
desperately true,
love.
I hold
no one above
You.

Your cranky moods
and radiant smile
keep me
all the while,
both
your passion proves.
It is my singular delight
to keep you in sight
as your passion moves
Me.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-09-06 11:57 AM

Not one poem as spectacular as this one needs a title! It truly makes me smile!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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2 posted 1999-09-06 12:00 PM

Excellent as ever, you are, DE.

This is so full of warmth...its wonderful.

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 1999-09-06 12:25 PM

I love it, DE, but can't think of a title either...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-06 01:33 PM

No title in mind either! But what beauty you have painted here! This was just WONDERFUL! I really loved it!!!! I can't really put into words how this reached out and touched me today! Thanks for sharing it with us all!

Billy
Junior Member

since 1999-09-05

Posts 25

5 posted 1999-09-06 02:42 PM

Nice job. How about "I won't take flight"

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-09-07 06:37 AM

Thank you my fellow poets. This piece shows how tired I was when I wrote it, eh?

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-09-07 08:51 AM

Wonderful Dream...what about "Moved by your passion"

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 1999-09-07 12:06 PM

Some things, like love, cannot be bought; and some poems, "perfect", cannot be named.

Well done.

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