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Dear star... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Dear star, why is your light so dim Reflecting in my cup? It’s filled with hope up to the brim And faith in every drop I drink the hope and faith and soon You can’t be seen at all Dear star, who swept you with a broom Confess, who made you fall? ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Something beautiful is lost...why??? Makes me wonder!!! Point well made!!! Thank You!!  Jusbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-06-99).] |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Actually it was "When hope and faith are not present, dreams cannot be seen." BUt your interpetation was very interesting. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
tell me what you think |
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